Isabella "Bella" Raymond, I am no longer restarting my entire book. She always has a good way of convincing me that my story is good the way it is and she knows when to tell me that this idea is too much like twilight or this idea sucks. She tells me like it is, no fluff or any of that. She's the bomb and The Flawed Utopia would definintly suck without her.
Someday she'll make a great editor who gets paid (right now she's my free editor, haha).
Anyway... onto today's events.
I had to run the mile in Dance class and got 10:49 minutes. So, I'm happy. Also, I'm reading Bless Me Ultima by Rudolfo Anaya and it's so good. The scenery is so beautifully painted that it makes me want to go back through the Flawed Utopia and just describe the scenery like he does. I mean, he paints it so well that you can see the river, that you can see the llano (the plain). Everything is so vivid and beautiful.
I'm editing my bonfire scene right now. It's almost done and the whole Caleb fiasco is comming in soon. Can't wait to type that up!
Later!
-Stephanie
oh, and here's a funny chart i made of everyone's height.
you might not be able to read it but here's the measurements.
1. Jason 6ft 7in
2. Katarina 5ft 4in
3. Damian 6ft 11in
4. Ethan 6ft 6 in
5. Audrey 5ft 10in
6. Peyton 5ft 2 and a half inches
7. Caleb 6ft 9in
8. Phoebe 5ft 7in
9. Blake 6ft 6in
10. Aidan and Derek 6ft 10in
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